Peer Reviews – Lilly Flack Literature Blog

Peer Review 1

Peer Review for Anna Castagnella Hi Anna, I really liked your poem ‘The Orange Mountains’ about the recent bushfires. The devastation to our land is really a big message from nature about our treatment towards the earth. I really appreciated that you added pictures as well that show the intensity of the fires and drasticContinue reading “Peer Review 1”

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Peer Review for Jared Marks Hi Jared, I really enjoyed your letter to Meg in Down at the Dump. I thought it was an excellent piece as it felt very emotional and genuine. I really liked the tone and language you used throughout the letter, almost demanding but in a caring way to list offContinue reading “Peer Review 4”

Peer Review 3

Peer Review 3 Peer Review for Abby Aaron Hi Abby! I found your blog post about Arthur Streeton’s piece ‘Fires On: Lapstone Tunnel’ really interesting. I thought your points about how the artist uses colour and structure to portray his views about the impending railway revolution and impact were very intriguing and accurate. I alsoContinue reading “Peer Review 3”

Peer Review 2

Peer review for Gavin Tran Hi Gavin! I really enjoyed your post about Sidney Nolan’s painting of Ned Kelly. It gave me a great insight into perhaps why he painted it in the obscure way he did, and the power of the colours he used. It would have been really great if you had alsoContinue reading “Peer Review 2”

Peer Review 1

Peer Review for Evelyn Kavvalos Hi Evelyn! I really enjoyed your blog post, as it shows how such a simple place can hold such a big significance. I didn’t grow up in the same house my whole life, and I moved around a lot, so it is harder for me to find that connection toContinue reading “Peer Review 1”