Peer Review 4

Peer Review for Jared Marks

Write a letter to Meg in “Down at the Dump” telling her what you think about her relationship with Lummy.

Hi Jared, I really enjoyed your letter to Meg in Down at the Dump. I thought it was an excellent piece as it felt very emotional and genuine. I really liked the tone and language you used throughout the letter, almost demanding but in a caring way to list off how she should live. I thought that you offered great advice to Meg and would have given her a really eyeopening insight to her relationship. I also really liked your “Shakespearean love” reference and how that went for Juliet in comparison to what could happen for Meg. I think if Meg really had received this letter in the mail, she would have found it very useful and powerful. If only characters existed for our insight in real life!

• Lilly 🙂